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Post by Guest on Sat 06 Aug 2011, 10:03 am

The beautiful world of Pokemon is itself inhabited by creatures obviously known as Pokemon, they care for each other, they battle for each other and they work together as friends. People who train these pokemon are known as Humans, some are evil and some are good but there are also some good Pokemon and some bad pokemon.
10 Years ago there was an old generation of Pokemon, with the class of Red, Brendan, Blue and many other trainers. But a new generation is coming and this time even more Pokemon have been discovered...
A Young boy with a blue hat and blue shirt sat there in his room thinking and watching pokemon videos.

"My name is Jimson and my dream is to become a Pokemon trainer, I might not be as strong as my dad but I will become one!"

Jimson was a brand new trainer and was popular due to the fact he was the son of the famous trainer Red, he always idolized him and was very fond of his iconic pokemon: Pikachu.
But Jimson knew that if he was going to be as strong as him he needed to conquer the Kanto League which seemed hard in his views but he had alot of faith in him self.
Jimson also couldn't go to Professor Oak because he has been ill for the past two years and he is already twelve, this would frustrate him alot since he is desperate to get a pokemon.

"Hey Jimson" said a whiny old voice, the women crept in and it was Jimson's mum Julia. She had blonde hair and was in her mid 20's, she seemed very stressed out and tired but then again mums usually are.

'I got a present for you, it is from your dad' she said in a quirky way

Jimson opened up the present and inside was a pokeball with a fire sign on the top, Jimson felt his heart beat fast and felt out all the excitement. Jimson threw up the Pokeball in there and a massive bolt of light came out. Jimson could not believe his eyes.

"Teeeeepig!" Roared the Pokemon.

Jimson stood there with his eyes glowing in happiness, this was the best day of his life. He has now got his first pokemon and will be able to go on a journey.

"Thanks mum! Now I can go on a pokemon journey" Said Jimson

"Woah woah woah" She relied, 'Not yet, we need to wait for your badge case and PokeDex to arrive, I just ordered one right now. Also I heard some bad news, Professor Oak has now passed away unfortunately, Blue Oak is the new successor'.

"Ah that is a shame" Said Jimson.

"Anyway you better get some sleep, It's 10:30 PM and it is way past your bed time! You're PokeDex and badge case will come at 9:00 AM"

Jimson nodded his head, got undressed and went to bed. His mum smiled and closed the door. Jimson then put on his pyjamas, sat in bed and hugged his Tepig. He knew that this will be the dawn of a new adventure.

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Re: Pokemon AquaRed - Chater 1 - Red's son.

Post by Drago on Sat 06 Aug 2011, 10:04 am

posting for the count turbo
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Post by legolosarrow on Sat 06 Aug 2011, 2:38 pm

Drago, you cant just post for the count, that counts as spam.
Anyways, great fan-fic turbo, but why did you kill off Oask so simply like that?With so little emotion.

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Post by Drago on Sat 06 Aug 2011, 4:24 pm

Lol sorry for spamming nice fan fic and who needs emotion
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Post by Guest on Sun 07 Aug 2011, 6:25 am

legolosarrow wrote:Drago, you cant just post for the count, that counts as spam.
Anyways, great fan-fic turbo, but why did you kill off Oask so simply like that?With so little emotion.

Well I thought it was a good time to introduce some new characters to the series, I'm trying to make it seem a little futuristic. In Red/Blue I think he is 65 but this is based 10 years in the future so I wanted to make it seem realistic.

Red is about 16 when he is at Mt Silver so he is 24 years old.

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Post by Drago on Sun 07 Aug 2011, 8:54 am

Wait 24 what age is his son? I smell a plot hole
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Post by Coolchill214 on Sun 07 Aug 2011, 1:17 pm

Awesomeness :3 Gimme more..now D:< Plus, if there was tons of emotion,it would be considered an emotional story-when it's more adventurous and daring. In Captain America,when Bucky died,how much emotion was shown? Very little-they couldn't focus on Cap crying every scene.
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Post by TrainerAshley on Sun 07 Aug 2011, 1:23 pm

Drago wrote:Wait 24 what age is his son? I smell a plot hole
^^ True. But it is very good!! I love it. Btw, Drago posted how many times?? Hmm, wonder why.
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Post by Drago on Sun 07 Aug 2011, 2:18 pm

so do i
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Post by TrainerAshley on Sun 07 Aug 2011, 3:50 pm

D; Not very nice Drago.
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Post by Coolchill214 on Sun 07 Aug 2011, 4:55 pm

Ya Drago,stop spamming for post count! Why would I ever do that?!
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Post by legolosarrow on Mon 08 Aug 2011, 6:54 am

Finnaly I have somone on my side against Dragos spamming for the post count!

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