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Post by Hydrocannon on Wed 13 Oct 2010, 11:23 pm

The Great Switch
Chapter 1

It was a bright and sunny day in goldenrod. Bill was unveiling a weird new machine that could switch people and their pokemon, letting each see the world through the other’s eyes. It was an amazing machine that took years and years to build, but now that it was finally done, Bill was ready to unveil it to the world! He sat outside the radio tower, cameras and microphones all around him ready to broadcast to Johto, Kanto, Sinnoh, Hoenn, and Isshu. “This machine will revolutionize the world of pokemon! With this machine, we will gain a new understanding of our pokemon, and our pokemon of us. Now, may I have a volunteer to come up and show us how this machine works?” A young boy with a shirt with a pokeball covering it, long blue jeans, a pair of hiking boots, brown hair, and a necklace with his most prized possetion, the earth badge, on the end, raised his hand, and was chosen. “What’s your name young man?”
“Xavier, Mr. Bill, sir” The young boy said, with excitement in his voice.
“Well, Xavier, you will be the first to experience this amazing machine! You’re so lucky!” Bill said with a grin on his face. “now, if you would release your pokemon, put your hand on the machine, and have your pokemon touch the machine as well, I will explain how it works.
Xavier sent out his houndour, and they both placed their hands and paws respectively on the machine.
“Allow me to explain how the machine works, The machine polarizes the cells in your podyy, making them attracted to the machine…” Bill continued to explain the workings of this complex contraption while Xavier waited for the moment to come.
“Now, without further ado, let’s start this baby up!” Bill pushed the big green “start” button, waiting for it to initiate.
“MALFUNCTION! MALFUNCTION!” the machine blared with lights, and alarms going off as if Officer Jenny were chasing criminals.
A giant shockwave ran through goldenrod, azalea town, all the way to newbark, to lavender, and throughout every region!


What exactly was that shockwave, and what did it do? What will come of this?
Tune in for part 2! Coming soon!
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Post by Drago on Thu 14 Oct 2010, 11:33 am

crap i nedd to post on the rp
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Post by Hydrocannon on Thu 21 Oct 2010, 11:06 pm

Chapter 2


"Uhhg...What the heck happened?" Bill awoke, drowsy, dazed, and confused. He got up, and immediately fell back down. "What the heck? Guess my legs are a bit wobbly...I'll just use the hand rail to. WHAT THE?!?!" Bill reached for the hand rail with his hands, which weren't hands at all, but paws! Eevee paws! "Wait...did my mind get switched with Eevee's?! There's only one way to find out." Bill turned around and saw his body lying on the ground. "Oh my word...This is...AWESOME! I changed bodeis! I guess my machine worked after all! Guess I should wake me up. "Bill" bit his own body, hoping it would wake up, but to no avail.
"Ok...how about...headbbutt?" It didn't work. In fact, nothing worked. And as Bill looked around the radio tower, he noticed many other pokemon in the same situation. "OH dear...My machine DID malfunction. Every trainer has had their minds swapped with their pokemon. And it seems as though our human bodies couldn't handle the shockwave. I just hope I can fix the machine as an ee-" Bill gasped. He couldn't believe what he say.
"This is bad. Really really bad."

To be continued.
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Re: The Great Switch! The fanfic!

Post by SkateboardingMunchlax on Fri 22 Oct 2010, 11:57 am

I like this FF Hydro and Drago please don't spam, thank you.

Anyway...I like it, so you should be proud of yourself.
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Re: The Great Switch! The fanfic!

Post by Hydrocannon on Fri 22 Oct 2010, 12:36 pm

SkateboardingMunchlax wrote:I like this FF Hydro and Drago please don't spam, thank you.

Anyway...I like it, so you should be proud of yourself.

Why thank you. I'm honored. Very Happy

Chapter 3: Don't cross the Cross brothers

"It...it...it's GONE!"
BIll looked in front of him and saw his time machine was stolen!
"oh this is bad! This is very very bad! I...I don't know what to do."
Bill looked around paniced and saw 3 pokemon walking around, in shock, but oddly happy.
'You three! Can you come up here please!"
The three pokemon were a larvitar, a houndour, and a shiny murkrow.
Bill asked them who they were and they told him there were brothers.
"My name's Xavier Cross!" announced the houndoom, who let out a short bark.
"I'm Christopher!" announced the larvitar, clenching it's fists.
"And I'm Maxwell". The Murkrow looked to be the youngest and flapped it's wings.
"Well, as you know, I'm Bill"
"What exactly happened Mr Bill?" Xavier asked while tilting his head.
"Well, my machine malfunctioned and...as you can see-now it's gone."
"What are we gonna do?" The murkrow screamed.
"Calm down. I think I know who took it. Look here, on the ground. there's a line and paw prints. Obviously made by a snake and a mammal of some sort."
"So...you think a snake and a...cat or dog stole your machine?" Chris was looking at the tracks, and was a bit unsure.
"Well, they're the only tracks leading that way, and it was behind where I was standing, so they could have snuck in and stolen the machine. It may not be much, but it's a lead we can go on. I hate to ask you three this, but would yo mind helping me find those culprits so I can get you back to your human bodies? If I can get the machine, I know I can fix it."
"You can count on us Mr. Bill!" The Cross brothers shouted together.
"Ready Chris? Ready Max?"
"Ready! 1, 2, 3! Don't cross the Cross brothers!"

The search begins in chapter 4!
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Chapter 4: Diverging Paths


"Ok...the tracks lead to this tree and then they seem to...split" Bill let out a sigh.
"We can split up! two of us can go one way! and two can go the other!" Xavier suggested. "I'll go with Max. Chris, do you wanna go with Bill?"
"No problem bro. Alright Bill, you and I will take the west, Max and Xavier will take the east."
With that, the teams went on their way.
"The machine is extremely heavy. I...I don't understand how they were able to lug it this far in such a short amount of time. I needed my machamp just to move it from my house in Goldenrod. the pokemon must be very powerful."
"Or, perhaps they woke up earlier somehow and got ahead start on us. either way, they couldn't have gone far."
"Right. We need to keep our eyes peeled."

"Hey bro, you want me to fly ahead to scout out for them?"
"Thanks, but I don't want them spotting you. It'll be at least a two on one if you ggo alone. At least this way we have a fighting chance against them.
"That's a good idea brother."
"Hehe. you think so?" Xavier said sticking out his tongue. "I just hope Chris and Bill are ok."

The group has split into two to cover more ground! but will that move ultimately backfire in the end?
Tune in for part 5!
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OoC: From here on in, I'm going to branch this into two part and make 2 new topics so I don't have to make one huge post.
I'll be writing each part for each team at one time so no one team gets farther.
The topics will be
"The Great Switch: Team Bill/Chris"
And
"The Great Switch: Team Xavier/Max".

And if you're confused about the colors, Xavier is red since he's a houndour.
Chris is green since he's a larvitar.
Max is violet since he's a (fabulous!) shiny murkrow
And from here on in, Bill will be brown (to help distinguish between text and Bill) since he's an eevee. he's also italcised because brown's rather close to black. So italics help with distinguishing between non-speaking and him.

If someone could please post a comment after each of my chapters giving me comments or feedback, I'd appreciate. I don't want to double-post and having someone post will make things much easier. Thanks ^_^
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